That's fantastic, Roz! The only thing I noticed was a couple of typos.
"Divorce" rather than "divorse"
I would add "in" to this sentence:
Later she had other problems which resulted "in" her parents' divorce.
And did you mean "peer" pressure?
I love that picture of Veronica, the facial expression you did is wonderful.
ETA: Fox, we were posting at the same time
"Divorce" rather than "divorse"
I would add "in" to this sentence:
Later she had other problems which resulted "in" her parents' divorce.
And did you mean "peer" pressure?
I love that picture of Veronica, the facial expression you did is wonderful.
ETA: Fox, we were posting at the same time